My FPS Game

AliceMaster00 · **My FPS Game -** 12-12-2011, 01:10 AM

I tried. Here are the controls: (note: The game lags while inside the rooms)
arrow keys= move
mouse= shoot
g= throw grenade
space= jump
enter= open doors
r= reload

FPS Creators may use this game as referance once updated.

deathsniper127 · 12-12-2011, 10:47 AM

You should try this... if you put the speed to 10 for the world right when it starts then shoot and reload as much as you can the gun is facing your right and the arms are in the wrong position

AliceMaster00 · 12-12-2011, 10:51 AM

Did you find something to make it more realistic and not glitch horriblly?

deathsniper127 · 12-12-2011, 11:03 AM

Well, when i played it it didnt glitch horribly.. except the arms thingss it actually ran pretty fast.

deathsniper127 · 12-12-2011, 11:03 AM

and make the up, down screen thing slower

deathsniper127 · 12-12-2011, 11:07 AM

And one more thing... Go and change the throwing grenade thing so when you drop the grenade it doesn't blow up on you.

jediaction · 09:49 AM

Feedback...

Pros:

Decent Camera Animations
Ammo System
Grenade Drop

Cons:

No Sound
Glitchy Reloading
Not much to offer

Overall

43/100 by Chrome Games
PROBLEMATIC

I'll start with the glitches. The frist thing I ran into was the door in the beginning. If you press Enter more than once, it keeps spinning around. That brings me to my second point, there should be ingame instructions. Also, When I pressed reload, the gun repositioned in a messed up position. The controls are clunky also. You have to move your entire hand just to reload the gun because move is the arrow keys instead of w,s,a and d. To call this a game doesn't qualify well. It is more of a FPS Base System, which is what I see now and in your description. The system just needs more polishing before final release such as: Sounds, better reloading animations, better controls, and more to offer. I did like the grenade drop, but that needs to be improved also.

deathsniper127 · 12-12-2011, 04:20 PM

uhmm sir, im pretty sure i was doing it right because i only used 10x speed to hurry up the process becausee everytime i reloaded the arm's repositioned.

deathsniper127 · 12-12-2011, 04:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jediaction

Feedback...

Pros:

Decent Camera Animations
Ammo System
Grenade Drop

Cons:

No Sound
Glitchy Reloading
Not much to offer

Overall

43/100 by Chrome Games
VERY BAD

I'll start with the glitches. The frist thing I ran into was the door in the beginning. If you press Enter more than once, it keeps spinning around. That brings me to my second point, there should be ingame instructions. Also, When I pressed reload, the gun repositioned in a messed up position. The controls are clunky also. You have to move your entire hand just to reload the gun because move is the arrow keys instead of w,s,a and d. To call this a game doesn't qualify well. It is more of a FPS Base System, which is what I see now and in your description. The system just needs more polishing before final release such as: Sounds, better reloading animations, better controls, and more to offer. I did like the grenade drop, but that needs to be improved also.

Can you please check out my FPS ;D thankss

Mr Kidnapper · 12-12-2011, 09:07 PM

Ought to work on your animations. Nothing is more important than what the user themselves see. 'Fer example, when shooting the slide will pull back on its own and a casing will fly out in some random direction. That would be good. Due to the way the gun is angled, sometimes this casing might not be seen.
One thing I notice is the way the character holds the gun. I don't think anyone holds a gun like that. When they teach you basic weapons training, the idea is to hold the grip with both hands, not the grip with one and the slide/hammer with the other, unless it were a revolver and you were trying to spew out as many bullets as you could in a short amount of time.
It is not entirely necessary for you to have a bullet literally fly out, however it may do you some good if every so often a yellow beam of light came out of the barrel called a tracer bullet. Flash anims would be nice, too.
In the case of your reload anims, it's just odd in general. The gun is angled funny and the slide is pulled back from a direction where many people would find it silly and inefficient to pull it from.
Perhaps this weekend I will begin a series of tutorials on FPS animations and basic method requirements. This week is a little too busy.

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deathsniper127 Member Status: Offline Posts: 38 Join Date: Oct 2011	12-12-2011, 10:47 AM You should try this... if you put the speed to 10 for the world right when it starts then shoot and reload as much as you can the gun is facing your right and the arms are in the wrong position

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AliceMaster00 Senior Member Status: Offline Posts: 167 Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: You know that gap between the bottom of your dresser and the floor? Yeah, there.	12-12-2011, 10:51 AM Did you find something to make it more realistic and not glitch horriblly? What a piece of work is a man? How noble in reason, how infinite in faculties, in form and in motion, how express and admirable how like an angel! What apprehension oh how like a god! The beauty of thee world, the paragon of animals, and yet- to me, what is this quintessence o' dust? Man delights, not me. Nor woman either, nor woman either.

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deathsniper127 Member Status: Offline Posts: 38 Join Date: Oct 2011	12-12-2011, 11:03 AM Well, when i played it it didnt glitch horribly.. except the arms thingss it actually ran pretty fast.

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deathsniper127 Member Status: Offline Posts: 38 Join Date: Oct 2011	12-12-2011, 11:03 AM and make the up, down screen thing slower

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deathsniper127 Member Status: Offline Posts: 38 Join Date: Oct 2011	12-12-2011, 11:07 AM And one more thing... Go and change the throwing grenade thing so when you drop the grenade it doesn't blow up on you.

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jediaction Senior Member Status: Offline Posts: 5,064 Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Bel Air, Maryland	12-12-2011, 04:13 PM *Feedback...* Pros: Decent Camera Animations Ammo System Grenade Drop Cons: No Sound Glitchy Reloading Not much to offer Overall 43/100 by Chrome Games PROBLEMATIC I'll start with the glitches. The frist thing I ran into was the door in the beginning. If you press Enter more than once, it keeps spinning around. That brings me to my second point, there should be ingame instructions. Also, When I pressed reload, the gun repositioned in a messed up position. The controls are clunky also. You have to move your entire hand just to reload the gun because move is the arrow keys instead of w,s,a and d. To call this a game doesn't qualify well. It is more of a FPS Base System, which is what I see now and in your description. The system just needs more polishing before final release such as: Sounds, better reloading animations, better controls, and more to offer. I did like the grenade drop, but that needs to be improved also. Website: www.salokingames.com FaceBook: www.facebook.com/SalokinGames Last edited by jediaction; 04-11-2012 at 09:49 AM.

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deathsniper127 Member Status: Offline Posts: 38 Join Date: Oct 2011	12-12-2011, 04:20 PM uhmm sir, im pretty sure i was doing it right because i only used 10x speed to hurry up the process becausee everytime i reloaded the arm's repositioned.

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Mr Kidnapper Senior Member Status: Offline Posts: 442 Join Date: Feb 2011	12-12-2011, 09:07 PM Ought to work on your animations. Nothing is more important than what the user themselves see. 'Fer example, when shooting the slide will pull back on its own and a casing will fly out in some random direction. That would be good. Due to the way the gun is angled, sometimes this casing might not be seen. One thing I notice is the way the character holds the gun. I don't think anyone holds a gun like that. When they teach you basic weapons training, the idea is to hold the grip with both hands, not the grip with one and the slide/hammer with the other, unless it were a revolver and you were trying to spew out as many bullets as you could in a short amount of time. It is not entirely necessary for you to have a bullet literally fly out, however it may do you some good if every so often a yellow beam of light came out of the barrel called a tracer bullet. Flash anims would be nice, too. In the case of your reload anims, it's just odd in general. The gun is angled funny and the slide is pulled back from a direction where many people would find it silly and inefficient to pull it from. Perhaps this weekend I will begin a series of tutorials on FPS animations and basic method requirements. This week is a little too busy.