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The Best of the West
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Talking The Best of the West - 07-12-2009, 07:14 PM

This is a movie I spent a good amount of time on. I made it about a week ago but finally I figured out how to shrink down the file size so I could upload it. Enjoy! Please post comments.

EDIT: I reloaded the video with the sound fixed.
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File Type: a2w Wildwest.a2w (18.36 MB, 199 views)

Last edited by Veryuhbull; 07-14-2009 at 06:34 PM. Reason: Problems have been solved.
   
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I can't download your file!
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Exclamation I can't download your file! - 07-13-2009, 04:09 AM

Sorry, I can't download your file!
   
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It should work.
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Smile It should work. - 07-13-2009, 05:32 PM

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Sorry, I can't download your file!
I re-upoaded my file and downloaded it myself, and it should fine now.
   
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Default 07-15-2009, 09:37 AM

Thanks.
   
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Default 07-17-2009, 12:30 AM

Very well done. I noticed two typos ("I paniced and shot him." and "..the two duelists were farther and son."), but other than that very good job. I especially liked the red camera effect you put on to symbolize death.


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Default 07-24-2009, 07:05 PM

The camera angles were nice, it was an interesting story, and the music definitely pushed the emotions.

I think for an alice movie, it definitely rates a 5/5 but can I suggest something? I didn't get the hint with the black screen and kept watching the film waiting for something to happen. Maybe Just roll yourself some credits while the music finishes would add a nice move-like touch.
   
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Thumbs up 08-16-2009, 01:26 AM

All I have to say is WOW, this movie is great, the storyline, the camera effects, the music everything! Keep up the good work!
   
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awesome
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Talking awesome - 09-07-2009, 09:24 PM

that was the best vid iv ever watched
   
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Default 09-18-2009, 09:06 PM

Amahhhhzing. :]

Now the only thing that I was a bit iffy about was your spelling. You made quite a bit of spelling mistakes and that distracted from the actual video. Just saying.
   
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Default 09-21-2009, 12:52 PM

Wow, that was really good. In class we're doing Alice too so this gave me a few ideas of how to do it
   
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