A Short Story

[dubastot]

Originally Posted by Revolt

This might be too late of a response, but after re-reading (without being in such a rush) your story makes a lot more sense. I also think that since you were limited by the length of the story, you had to cram a lot of information in a small space, in a way "giving away" the "mysteries" of the story.

Very nice though, a longer version, even a book would be EPIC.

I don't think a book is going to be made anytime soon. Thanks for responding though.