Forum: The Lounge
12-14-2010, 09:03 PM
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Replies: 10
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This might be too late of a response, but after...
This might be too late of a response, but after re-reading (without being in such a rush) your story makes a lot more sense. I also think that since you were limited by the length of the story, you...
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Forum: The Lounge
12-13-2010, 07:12 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 14,269
:eek: WOAH.
That was honestly very nice,...
:eek: WOAH.
That was honestly very nice, other than a few small grammer/flow errors, the story was very deep and meaningful. (Almost didn't read it, but I figured I'd give it a try :D)
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